Tuesday, February 9, 2010

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1: I remember sitting down on that triangular seat of my new two wheel, no training wheels, bicycle, I had just gotten for christmas. I was completely scared to death and heald on the the handle bars for dear life. My sister holding the bike steady promised me that she would not let go at all. Well as we propelled forward slowly down the road she let go, and then I was on the ground before I could even protest to her.

2: Riding my first bike with training wheels in tact was one of my favorite things to do as a child. But as my friends rode with me on there two wheeled bikes I grew jealous. I wanted to be able to do what they were doing and not feel left out. So I asked my mother to get me a new bike with two wheels for christmas. Christmas morning there my new bike sat with a big red bow on it. I could not have been happier.

2 comments:

  1. They both are very good so far as they go, but they don't go far enough. At the end of the first graf, we have to know that we are going to be getting reasons for something and we have to have a preview of those reasons. Right now, that's not there. So, push that along a little further, ok?

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  2. ok great idea im glad your here to helop! :)

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