1: My sister and niece are of the same blood obviously. But they are completly different and yet excactly the same in every sense possible. My sister a crazy lady and my niece a sweet caring nine year old with the biggest heart. Yet my niece can be just as crazy and mean as my sister.
2: My dog and cat are very much alike in the loving sense. But when it comes to brains not so much. My dog listens to me and does what I say where my cat expects me to do what she wants. Yet they both love me unconditionally and are both sweet in there own way.
Sunday, March 7, 2010
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Before we're done with the intro we need to know what are the three differences you're going to deal with. Whichever of these topics you use, the intro needs a hook, something to pull us in, something more than a simple announcement of topic which is what these are doing so far.
ReplyDeleteok thanks i feel like all my essays are the same structure no matter how many times i read through your're lectures i think it was those darn high school teachers drilling it into our brains for it to be this way but thank you for the advice that does make more sense i'll try harder
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